After The Funeral - Analysis
in Memory Of Ann Jones
Grotesque grief: the funeral as noisy machinery
The poem opens by refusing a gentle elegy. Instead, it throws us into a funeral scene rendered in animal noise and physical ugliness: mule praises, brays
, ears like sailshaped
things, the muffle-toed tap
of a peg. Even the body is described through harsh, almost comic-black details—teeth in black
, spittled eyes
, salt ponds in the sleeves
. The central claim this opening makes is blunt: death does not naturally produce purity or meaning; it produces mess, sound, and the blunt impact of the spade. The morning smack of the spade
does not consecrate the dead; it wakes up sleep
like an unwanted alarm. From the start, Thomas positions mourning as something that can be vulgar, intrusive, and even performative—more like a village commotion than a sacred rite.
The boy in the coffin: a private violence under public ritual
Out of that noisy exterior, the poem suddenly reveals a hidden inner wound: the spade’s blow shakes a desolate boy
who, in a startling image, slits his throat / In the dark of the coffin
and sheds dry leaves
. This is not literal suicide so much as a picture of how grief turns inward and becomes self-harm—how the mourner can feel buried along with the dead. The boy is both witness and victim: the funeral happens above ground, but inside him something is strangling itself in darkness. The contradiction is already in place: the community’s ritual proceeds with its mule-like praises
, while the real damage is intimate, silent, and vaguely shameful, like dry leaves
falling where they should not fall. The poem’s tone here is feverish and accusatory, as if the speaker is angry at the whole apparatus of mourning for failing to match the truth of what it does to a person.
The memorial room: stuffed fox, stale fern, and the loneliness of duty
After the burial comes the social aftermath: the feast of tear-stuffed time and thistles
in a room with a stuffed fox and a stale fern
. These objects matter because they make grief feel staged and airless. A stuffed fox is a dead thing posed as lifelike; a stale fern is a living thing reduced to décor. In that room the speaker says, I stand, for this memorial's sake, alone
—alone not because no one is present, but because he feels set apart by his role and by his awareness of how false a memorial can become. The dead woman, humped Ann
, is both named and reduced, made physically awkward in death as she was in life. The hours are snivelling
: mourning is presented as self-pitying, a sound in the throat. The poem begins to narrow its focus from death in general to the specific problem of what it means to speak for Ann.
The poem’s hinge: refusing the holy flood of praise
The sharpest turn arrives in the parenthetical self-correction. The speaker has just imagined Ann’s heart in extravagant, mythic terms—her fountain heart
flooding the parched worlds of Wales
and drowning suns. Then he interrupts himself: this for her is a monstrous image
, Magnified out of praise
; her death was a still drop
. In these lines the poem exposes its own temptation: to transform a real person into a grand, liquid emblem that flatters the poet’s voice as much as it honors the dead. The speaker even imagines Ann objecting: she would not have me sinking
in her heart’s fame
; she would lie dumb and deep
and need no druid
of her broken body. The tension becomes explicit: elegy wants to make a legend, but the dead may want privacy, smallness, and silence. The tone shifts from baroque excess to a startling ethical clarity—an admission that poetic praise can be a kind of theft.
And yet: the bard summons the seas anyway
The poem’s most unsettling honesty is that it does not stop after that correction. It immediately confesses, But I
—and that But
carries both stubbornness and need. The speaker claims the role of Ann’s bard
and calls all / The seas to service
so her wood-tongued virtue
will Babble like a bellbuoy
over hymning heads
. This is a deliberate re-entry into public, ringing language. He wants the walls to bow, her love to sing and swing through a brown chapel
, and her spirit to be blessed by four, crossing birds
. In other words, he wants the world to participate in the work of making Ann large. The contradiction is now the engine of the poem: he knows mythologizing her is monstrous
, yet he cannot resist it, perhaps because the poet’s grief needs an instrument as big as the sea. The tone here is fervent and ceremonial, as if he is trying to outshout the earlier braying funeral—with something more beautiful but not necessarily more truthful.
Two Anns: meek milk-flesh and a skyward statue
The poem then splits Ann into two forms. One is intimate and mortal: Her flesh was meek as milk
. The other is what the poem makes of her: this skyward statue
with a wild breast
and giant skull
, carved in a room with a wet window
in a fiercely mourning house
. The place of carving matters: this “statue” is not in a cathedral but in the domestic weather of grief, shaped by tears and time. The speaker insists he knows the ordinary, difficult Ann: scrubbed and sour humble hands
, a threadbare / Whisper
, wits drilled hollow
, a face like a fist
dying clenched
on pain. These are not flattering details; they refuse prettification. Yet in the next breath he declares sculptured Ann is seventy years of stone
. The poem’s central argument sharpens: memorial language petrifies. It preserves, but it also hardens a life into something monumental that can no longer answer back.
When memorials come alive: the fox’s twitch and the fern’s seeds
In the final lines, the room’s dead décor becomes a strange measure of the poem’s power. The speaker says these cloud-sopped, marble hands
and this monumental / Argument
storm him forever
over her grave, until The stuffed lung of the fox twitch and cry Love
and the fern begins to seed the black sill
. The image is eerie: a stuffed animal does not breathe; a lung cannot twitch. But the poem imagines praise animating what is dead, and grief forcing life to reappear in a room that has gone stale. That is both triumph and indictment. If the poet can make the fox cry Love
, he can also be accused of ventriloquism—putting words into the mouths (or lungs) of the dead and preserved.
A harder question the poem makes unavoidable
If Ann would lie dumb and deep
and need no druid
, what right does the speaker have to keep summoning seas and building statues in language? The poem does not answer cleanly; it stages the compulsion as something like weather—unstoppable, storm
driven. But it also leaves us with an uneasy suspicion: the memorial may be as much about saving the speaker from the desolate boy
in himself as it is about honoring Ann.
What the elegy finally admits
After the Funeral ends by holding two truths in the same hand: the dead deserve the modesty of the still drop
, and the living sometimes cannot mourn without making a flood. Thomas’s most moving achievement here is not the grandeur of the sea-summoning, but the poem’s willingness to accuse its own grandeur—to show how praise can be magnified
into monstrosity, and yet still be the only language the mourner has. In that sense, the poem becomes a memorial to Ann and a record of what memorializing does: it turns meek
flesh into stone
, and it leaves the speaker haunted enough to hear even a stuffed fox trying to breathe.
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