Backdropp Addresses Cowboy - Analysis
A cardboard hero walks in
The poem’s central move is to unmask the cowboy as a manufactured hero whose innocence is a pose, and to let the so-called backdrop speak back. From the first line, the cowboy is presented as a prop in a national costume: Starspangled cowboy
, sauntering
out of an almost- / silly West
. Everything about him is staged: the porcelain grin
, the papier-mache cactus / on wheels
. Atwood makes the “West” feel less like geography than like set decoration, something light enough to be dragged by a string.
The tone here is comic, but the comedy is edged with threat. The best example is the poem’s blunt contradiction: innocent as a bathtub / full of bullets
. Innocence becomes a container for violence, and the bathtub image brings the danger into a domestic, ordinary space—as if the culture has learned to treat ammunition as bathwater, normal and plentiful.
Righteousness that manufactures villains
As the poem continues, the cowboy’s inner posture creates the outer world. His righteous eyes
and laconic / trigger-fingers
don’t respond to villains; they produce them: they people the streets with villains
. Even the air becomes complicit: the air in front of you / blossoms with targets
. That verb blossoms
is key—something associated with flowers is twisted into a description of aiming. Violence is made to look like natural growth, like the landscape itself is flowering into things that deserve to be shot.
This is one of the poem’s sharpest tensions: the cowboy’s moral certainty depends on a world that can be cleanly divided into hero and criminal, yet the poem keeps showing that the “world” he moves through is flimsy, propped up, and authored by him. His heroism requires a steady supply of enemies, and his gaze obliges by turning whatever is ahead into a target.
The “heroic trail” that’s only trash and bone
The poem’s satire darkens when it inventories what the cowboy leaves behind. Instead of justice or order, he leaves a heroic / trail of desolation
, and the phrase is a deliberate insult: “heroic” is stapled onto wreckage. The wreckage itself is tellingly small and pathetic—beer bottles
and tincans
—until it isn’t, when we hit bird- / skulls bleaching
. The trail runs from litter to death, suggesting the same casualness behind both. Even the sunset, a classic Western backdrop, becomes a lighting effect on bones.
The cowboy myth promises a clean violence that restores order; this poem insists on mess: empty shells
, bones
, litter
. The more he performs heroism, the more the landscape reads like a dumping ground. The “West” he conquers looks less like wilderness than like a place repeatedly used up.
The turn: the admirer steps out of position
The poem pivots hard on a small admission: I ought to be watching
from behind a cliff
or cardboard storefront
, hands clasped / in admiration
. The speaker acknowledges the script: the viewer is supposed to hide, wait for the shooting, and worship the performance. But then comes the turn that changes everything: but I am elsewhere
. The speaker refuses the assigned seat in the audience.
From here, the poem stops being only a takedown of the cowboy and becomes a confrontation about who gets to be real. The question Then what about me
breaks the set’s fourth wall. The “backdrop” is no longer scenery; it becomes an “I” with its own claim to existence, agency, and injury.
The border he keeps trying to cross
The confrontation crystallizes around a border
the cowboy is always trying to cross
. The word feels political as well as mythic: not just the edge of town in a Western, but the line where one power enters another space and assumes it can rename it. The cowboy’s action is habitual—always trying—suggesting a continual impulse toward expansion. The speaker’s “I” meets him there, not as a villain to be dispatched, but as an obstacle his story can’t easily absorb.
Atwood makes the border scene strange and intimate by splitting the speaker into two roles at once. The speaker is the far-off limit the cowboy rides toward, and also the environment he is already inside.
Horizon you can’t lasso, mind you can’t clean
When the speaker says I am the horizon / you ride towards
, the “backdrop” becomes the promise that drives the cowboy forward: distance, destiny, the next open space. But it immediately adds: the thing you can never lasso
. This is a direct refusal of the cowboy’s signature gesture. The horizon can be chased, framed, and romanticized, but not possessed. The myth depends on capture—of land, of meaning, of the narrative itself—yet the poem insists that what he wants most stays out of reach.
Then the speaker offers the darker doubling: I am also what surrounds you: / my brain / scattered with your / tincans, bones, empty shells
. The landscape is no longer only land; it’s a mind. That shift raises the stakes. The cowboy’s passage doesn’t just damage a place; it damages a consciousness, leaving debris inside it. The phrase the litter of your invasions
turns what looked like genre entertainment into an account of repeated violation, where the aftereffects persist as mental clutter and trauma.
A final accusation: desecration, not adventure
The poem ends by stripping away the last protective layer of romance: I am the space you desecrate / as you pass through
. Desecrate is a religious word; it implies something once had value, maybe even sanctity, before being treated as disposable. The cowboy’s movement is not settlement or exploration but contamination. This ending also sharpens the poem’s key contradiction: the cowboy performs innocence and righteousness, but the speaker names his actual legacy as defilement.
What makes the ending hit is that it doesn’t merely insult the cowboy; it redefines the relationship. The “backdrop” is not passive matter there to be shot over and ridden across. It is the very space that makes the cowboy visible—and it is capable of judging him, resisting him, and keeping the one thing he wants most (the horizon) permanently beyond his rope.
The uncomfortable question the poem leaves hanging
If the cowboy’s eyes can make the air blossom
with targets, what happens when the “I” refuses to become a target or an admirer? The poem suggests that the myth may need violence not only to defeat villains, but to silence anything that won’t stay a cardboard storefront
. In other words, the speaker’s greatest provocation is not criticism—it is simply stepping out of the role of scenery.
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