The Two Songs - Analysis
A pastoral hymn that gets answered by a counter-hymn
The poem’s central claim is unsettling: the sweetest moral words in public speech can be either a genuine blessing or a way of making suffering feel necessary. Blake stages that problem as a kind of call-and-response. First an angel sings a clean, springtime creed—Mercy, pity, and peace
as the world’s release
. Then a devil doesn’t simply deny those virtues; he argues that they are built on poverty, misery, and fear, as if kindness can only exist when someone is kept low enough to receive it.
The two voices matter because both sound like they’re offering an explanation of the world. The angel gives a consoling summary; the devil gives a brutal account of how consolation can become a system. The poem asks us to notice how easily a song about compassion can slide into an argument for why compassion must never become unnecessary.
Angel-song: mercy drifting over cut grass
The angel appears in a scene that feels freshly washed: When the day was springing
, with new-mown hay
and a sun that simply follows its daily arc. The angel’s voice is broad and public—he sings all day
—as if mercy should be as natural as daylight, floating over ordinary labor and fields. Even the detail of the haycocks
turning brown
is gentle: it’s decay, but it’s the expected, harmless kind, the color of harvest rather than harm.
The tone here is trustful, almost instructive. The virtues are presented as a triad, compact enough to memorize, like a moral refrain. In this first song, the world’s wounds are assumed but not inspected; we get the promise of release
without being shown what, exactly, we’re released from.
The hinge: from mown hay to heath and furse
The poem turns sharply when the speaker heard a devil curse
. The landscape changes with the voice: we move from cultivated field to rough ground—the heath and the furse
. That shift isn’t just scenery; it suggests a different social and moral territory. The angel sings over what’s tended and gathered; the devil speaks where things grow thorny and unmanaged.
The effect is that the devil’s speech feels like a response the first scene conveniently excluded. It’s as if the poem says: you can sing Mercy
over hay, but the harder question is what mercy means out on the heath—where people and lives are not neatly arranged into pastoral calm.
Devil-logic: virtues that require victims
The devil’s argument is chilling because it is internally coherent. He claims Mercy vould be no more
if there were nobody poor
, and pity no more could be
if all were happy
. In other words, he defines these virtues not as ideals we aim toward, but as reactions to someone else’s deprivation. That turns goodness into a dependent emotion—something that needs misery to keep itself alive.
Then he twists peace
into something even uglier: mutual fear brings peace
. Peace becomes not a healing but a standoff. Under that definition, stability is purchased by intimidation, and the social order is calm only because people are afraid to move. When he concludes that Misery’s increase / Are mercy, pity, and peace
, the poem exposes a contradiction at the heart of easy moral language: the same words that comfort the suffering can also be used to justify a world arranged to produce sufferers.
Two sunsets, two meanings
Blake repeats the sunset, but the second time it feels caused rather than natural. After the angel sings, the sun went down
in the ordinary way; after the devil curses, the heavens gave a frown
. The day’s ending becomes judgmental, as if nature itself reacts to what has been spoken. That difference suggests the poem isn’t neutral between the two songs: the devil’s speech may be a truth-telling, but it is also a kind of poisoning of the air.
Still, the poem refuses to let the angel’s song be the final word. By giving the devil the last extended speech, Blake implies that any talk of compassion that doesn’t confront its dependence on inequality risks becoming a lullaby for the comfortable.
The hardest question the poem leaves behind
If mercy disappears when poverty disappears, is that a loss—or a moral victory? The devil calls it loss, because his world needs the roles of giver and receiver. The poem presses us to imagine a harder hope: a world where Mercy
and pity
are no longer required as emergency responses, and where peace
is not the quiet of mutual fear
, but something that doesn’t need a victim to prove it exists.
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