The Passing Spring
time
loss
haiku
melancholic
The Passing Spring - form Summary
Haiku of Transience and Empathy
This is a haiku that compresses transience into a single seasonal image. The phrase passing spring
functions as a kigo, signaling impermanence. In its brief lines, animal voices—mourning birds and weeping fish—project human sorrow and amplify communal grief without explicit commentary. The haiku's compact structure concentrates feeling and relies on the reader to connect image and mood, making absence and loss felt rather than stated.
The passing spring Birds mourn, Fishes weep With tearful eyes.
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