Stillness
haiku
tense
Stillness - form Summary
Haiku's Concentrated Observation
This three-line haiku relies on the form's extreme brevity to compress a single, striking image. The isolated word Stillness
functions as a pivot; the following image of a cicada's cry drilling into rock forces an abrupt sensory contrast. The haiku's compactness intensifies the collision of quiet and penetrating sound, producing a sudden, reflective tension characteristic of traditional Japanese haiku. The lineation isolates the opening noun, sharpening the turn.
Stillness-- the cicada's cry drills into the rocks.
Translated by Robert Hass
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