Taking a Nap
haiku
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Taking a Nap - form Summary
Haiku's Brevity Frames a Moment
This brief haiku distills a single domestic moment into a tactile, immediate image. In three short lines it freezes a nap’s stillness: the sleeper’s feet planted against a cool wall. The haiku’s compressed form forces attention on sensory detail and the present moment, making the ordinary act of napping feel quietly observed and whole. Its economy encourages the reader to inhabit the scene and supply a larger context.
Read Complete AnalysesTaking a nap, feet planted against a cool wall.
Translated by Robert Hass
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