Rainer Maria Rilke

Maidens II

Maidens II - meaning Summary

Unattainable Artistic Ideal

Rilke’s poem portrays the 'maidens' as an idealized, unattainable figure who represents poetic inspiration and desire. The poet receives glimpses of this distant presence in solitary gardens and silent chambers, experiences transient visions along moonlit paths, and longs for her without possession. As others begin to glimpse her, the specialness fades and memory becomes painful. The poem frames artistic yearning as a beautiful, fragile, and ultimately elusive condition.

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Maidens the poets learn from you to tell How solitary and remote you are, As night is lighted by one high bright star They draw light from the distance where you dwell. For poet you must always maiden be Even though his eyes the woman in you wake Wedding brocade your fragile wrists would break, Mysterious, elusive, from him flee. Within his garden let him wait alone Where benches stand expectant in the shade Within the chamber where the lyre was played Where he received you as the eternal One. Go! It grows dark—your voice and form no more His senses seek; he now no longer sees A white robe fluttering under dark beech trees Along the pathway where it gleamed before. He loves the long paths where no footfalls ring, And he loves much the silent chamber where Like a soft whisper through the quiet air He hears your voice, far distant, vanishing. The softly stealing echo comes again From crowds of men whom, wearily, he shuns; And many see you there—so his thought runs— And tenderest memories are pierced with pain.

Translated by Jessie Lamont
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