Damned Women - Analysis
A chorus of bodies labeled damned
Baudelaire’s central move is to take women the world would call fallen and describe them as a whole spiritual order: not simply sinful, but vast in appetite and suffering, hungry for something reality cannot supply. The poem opens with a deliberately unflattering simile—ruminating cattle
—yet it immediately complicates it: these figures are not mindless; they are pensive
, staring at the horizon of the sea
as if the ocean were a limit they ache to cross. Even their touch holds a double charge: clasped hands
and feet that seek the other’s
register sweet languor
and shudders of pain
at once. From the first stanza, the poem refuses a clean moral category. Desire is tenderness and injury in the same gesture.
Five landscapes, one recurring thirst
After the beach, the poem moves through a sequence of settings—woods, rocks, pagan caverns, and dark woods
again—like stations in a private pilgrimage. In the forest, some women return to origins: long confessions
, timid adolescence
, and names or memories carv[ed]
into young saplings
. The action is small, almost childlike, but it is also wounding: love is written by cutting into living green. The next group climbs into a harsher, visionary terrain: high rocks peopled with apparitions
, where Saint Anthony’s famous ordeal is replayed in their vicinity—naked, purple breasts
rising like lava
. The religious reference doesn’t purify desire; it makes it eruptive, volcanic, impossible to domesticate.
Then the poem drops underground into old pagan caverns
, lit by crumbling resin
. Here the women call directly to Bacchus, not for pleasure alone but for anesthesia: he can lull to sleep
ancient remorse
. The last group fuses the sacred and the punitive in one costume: they love scapulars
, conceal a whip
under long habits
, and mix froth of pleasure
with tears of torment
. Across these scenes, what changes is the décor—shoreline, grove, cliff, cave—while what stays constant is a need so intense it flips into pain. The women are not depicted as choosing suffering for its own sake; they are portrayed as people whose desire is so oversized it cannot settle.
The poem’s turn: from watching to following
The most important shift arrives when the speaker stops cataloging and begins to address them: O virgins, O demons, O monsters, O martyrs
. This is not just rhetorical flourish; it’s a change in ethical posture. The earlier stanzas can feel like a tableau of types, but the apostrophe insists these figures have a claim on the speaker. He gives them a grandeur the world denies: Great spirits, contemptuous of reality
, Seekers of the infinite
, simultaneously pious and satyric
. That last pairing is the poem’s guiding contradiction: holiness and lust are not opposites here, but twins. Their extremity—Sometimes full of cries, sometimes full of tears
—is treated as the sign of a real metaphysical hunger, not mere vice.
Pity that is also complicity
In the closing lines, the speaker confesses pursuit: my spirit has followed into your hell
. The poem’s sympathy is not distant; it is fascinated, even implicated. Calling them Poor sisters
both softens and binds—he claims kinship while acknowledging their social condemnation. And he loves them for the very things that doom them: gloomy sorrows
, unsatisfied thirsts
, and those startling containers—urns of love
—suggesting their hearts are not empty but overfull, heavy with stored intensity. The tenderness of I love you as much as I pity you
carries its own tension: pity can be a way of looking down, yet the speaker’s language keeps elevating them into the realm of infinite
seeking. They are damned less because they lack virtue than because they want too much.
A sharper question the poem leaves burning
If these women are contemptuous of reality
, is the poem praising their refusal—or diagnosing it as the source of their torment? The images keep offering escape routes (the sea’s horizon, Bacchus’s sleep, the religious habit), but each route returns them to the same mixture: pleasure
foaming up alongside tears
. The poem’s compassion feels real, yet it also risks making their suffering beautiful—turning shudders of pain
into an aesthetic thrill the speaker can afford to follow.
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