There Are So Many Tictoc - Analysis
Clocks as a noisy social instruction
The poem’s central claim is that mechanical time is a kind of public pressure, while Spring represents a freer, bodily rhythm that refuses to be managed. Cummings begins with a comic overload: so many tictoc
clocks are everywhere
, not merely measuring time but telling people
what time it is. That verb makes clocks sound like bosses or scolds. Even the example time stamp—five toc minutes
past six tic
—feels less like information than like a nagging chant, as if the whole day has been chopped into anxious little ticks.
The tone here is mock-irritated and mischievous. The invented phrase toctic time
turns the clock’s authority into babble; the poem makes the very sound of the mechanism seem silly. In that sense, the speaker isn’t only criticizing clocks—he is trying to break their spell by making their language ridiculous.
Spring as an ungoverned counterclock
The poem’s first big turn arrives with Spring is not regulated
. Against clocks that can get out of order
, Spring is described as incapable of malfunction. Cummings personifies Spring as if it had clock-hands, but then denies the whole metaphor: it does not have hands
that jerking move
over numbers slowly
. The mechanical image is introduced only to be refused, and that refusal is the point: Spring’s time is not a line moving over numbers but a living return.
Notice how the poem lingers on the physicality of clocks—weights
, springs wheels
—only to insist Spring has nothing of the kind
. The phrase its slender self
is tender and slightly intimate, as if Spring were a body rather than a season. The speaker’s affection for Spring is already preparing the poem’s final leap into kissing.
The tension: what humans can wind up, and what they cannot
One key contradiction runs through the poem: people treat time as something they control—something they can set, wind, regulate—yet their deepest experiences refuse that control. The line we do not
(left hanging before it continues) briefly widens the frame from clocks and seasons to human beings: there are things we can organize, and things we can’t. We can wind a clock; we cannot wind Spring. And by extension, we cannot fully schedule the arrivals that matter most—desire, warmth, renewal, the sudden courage to be close to someone.
When Spring arrives, language itself starts kissing
The parenthetical ending is more than a cute add-on; it’s the poem’s emotional proof. when kiss Spring comes
turns the season into an action, and then the syntax becomes gleefully tangled: we'll kiss each kiss other
and on kiss the kiss
. Words repeat and bump into each other the way mouths do—messy, immediate, unconcerned with neat sequence. If the first stanza was full of chopped-up minutes, the last one offers a different kind of repetition: not tick-tock, but kiss-kiss.
Crucially, the speaker doesn’t merely say clocks are irrelevant; he says they don't make
a toctic difference
to kissing you
and kissing me
. That phrasing keeps the clock-language but empties it of power. The poem’s tone shifts here from satire to intimacy: the speaker isn’t arguing anymore so much as leaning in.
A sharper question the poem dares to ask
If clocks are always telling people
what time it is, who benefits from that constant telling? The poem hints that the real danger is not lateness but obedience: a life where even Spring would have to keep appointments, and where kissing would need permission from tic clocks toc
.
Ending on a small, defiant freedom
By the end, Cummings has set up two kinds of order: the brittle order of numbered hours, and the resilient order of seasons and bodies. The poem doesn’t pretend clocks disappear; their tic
and toc
keep intruding. But it insists—through the stubborn, playful insistence of kisskiss
—that the most human acts happen on a timetable that can’t be regulated, wound, or made to behave.
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