The Babysitters - Analysis
Memory as an Argument with Time
The poem’s central claim is that time doesn’t merely pass; it re-sorts what happened, turning a lived summer into a strange exhibit where intimacy, class, and loss are hard to tell apart. Plath begins with a plain measure—It is ten years
—but the voice immediately slips into the unnerving vividness of recollection: the sun that flamed straight down
off Marblehead, the black glasses
used not for glamour but to hide our eyes
. The tone is half-wry, half-aching, as if the speaker both mocks the melodrama of youth and refuses to disown it. These babysitting summers in Swampscott—spent in huge, white
houses—become a lens for what adulthood has done to the sisters: separated them into opposite continents
, and made the past feel finished and yet still present, like a pressure in the chest.
Rich Houses, Small Lives
Plath pins the sisters’ emotional life against an almost inventory-like richness: eleven rooms and a yacht
, polished mahogany
, a cabin boy frosting cakes in six-colored
swirls. Yet the speaker’s experience inside that wealth is cramped and punishing. She sleeps beside the baby
on a too-short cot
; she burns her fingers ironing tiny ruchings
. The details are chosen to make luxury feel infantilizing: not grand meals and ease, but fussy clothing, tantrum logistics (the child who won’t go out unless his jersey stripes
match his socks), and the repetitive care-work that leaves no room for the self.
That’s the poem’s first big tension: it insists on the objective signs of privilege while refusing the moral that privilege equals happiness. The speaker even blurts, Or it was richness!
—as if she’s correcting herself mid-memory, admitting what it looked like from the outside. But the next sentence undercuts it: babies depressed me
. In this world, the caretakers (teenage sitters, borrowed maids, nervous cooks) absorb the household’s anxieties. Ellen is assigned for protection
, a phrase that makes the house feel less like a refuge than a place where something might happen.
Two Houses, One Education in Power
The poem’s second section shifts to the sister addressed as you
, and the comparison sharpens. In your house
there’s a rose garden
, a guest cottage
, even a model apothecary shop
—a toy version of usefulness, suggesting that in this class world, even labor can be turned into display. The sister knows the key to the bourbon
, a small, potent sign of belonging: access, secrecy, initiation. Meanwhile, the servants’ lives flicker in and out, precarious and judged. The cook—On trial, from Ireland
—burns cookies batch after batch until she’s fired. The phrase On trial
makes employment sound like court, and the repeated burning reads like panic: she cannot relax into the role the house demands.
Even the children’s play is shadowed by adult absence and adult rules. The sister plays Ja-Da
in a pink piqué dress
while the maid smokes and shoots pool under a green shaded lamp
. It’s a scene of temporary freedoms, but also of imitation: girls in fancy clothes performing a kind of grown-up-ness in the gaps left by the big people
. The poem keeps asking, quietly, who gets to act and who must serve, who has keys and who is borrowed
.
Children’s Island as a Museum of the Living
The poem turns on the exclamation O what has come over us
. Suddenly the speaker is less interested in cataloging wealth and more frightened by what the sisters have become. Their day-off begins with a petty, desperate theft—a sugared ham and a pineapple
from the grownups’ icebox—like children trying to feed a hunger they can’t name. They rent an old green boat
; one rows, the other reads aloud from the Generation of Vipers
, a book-title that injects contempt and moral venom into the idyll. It’s as if they are rowing not only away from work but toward an education in bitterness.
When they arrive, Children’s Island is deserted
, and the description freezes: creaking porches
, still interiors
, a place stopped
like a photograph. The simile is one of the poem’s most chilling: somebody laughing / But ten years dead
. In that image, laughter—normally the sign of life—becomes proof of absence, an artifact preserved after the person is gone. The island is no longer a playground; it’s a gallery where the sisters are forced to sense mortality and time’s violence. The title The Babysitters echoes here: these young women are supposed to watch over children, but the poem shows them encountering the fact that no one can “sit” time or keep anything safe.
Floating as Salvation, Floating as Sentence
The final stanza offers a brief physical relief: they step into the water, the thick salt
holds them up. Even the gulls are aggressive—bold
, diving as if they owned it all
—and the sisters beat them back with driftwood, a comic, fierce defense of their small claim to space. In the water, though, they become weightless and inseparable: two cork dolls
. The phrase is tender and unsettling at once. Dolls are cherished, but also manipulated; cork floats, but it’s also dead matter, shaped for use. Their closeness is real, yet the image hints that the closeness may have been a kind of suspension—protected not by strength but by buoyancy, by the salt that keeps bodies from sinking.
Then the poem snaps shut into its adult grief. The speaker asks: What keyhole
did we slip through, what door
has shut? Earlier, keys were literal—bourbon access, household privilege. Now the keyhole is metaphysical: some narrow passage from youth into whatever their lives are now, where reunions require waving across opposite continents
. The grasses’ shadows inch like hands of a clock
, bringing time back as a physical force. The tone becomes stark, stripped of anecdote, and ends with a blunt verdict: Everything has happened
. It’s not celebratory completion; it’s the exhausted recognition that the future has already spent itself into the present.
The Sharpest Question the Poem Leaves Us
When the speaker asks what door has shut, she’s also asking whether the sisters’ intimacy was ever freely chosen, or whether it was a byproduct of being little put-upon sisters
in spare rooms
. If the water held them up, what held them together? And if they could once float inseparable
, what does it mean that they now can only wave and call
—as if closeness has become a pantomime performed from a distance?
Not Just Nostalgia, but a Reckoning
What makes the poem linger is its refusal to settle on one moral. Wealth is both real and irrelevant; labor is both humiliating and oddly clarifying; sisterhood is both the warmest memory and the proof of loss. The past is rendered in bright particulars—Yardley cosmetics, a Dalmatian, a green lamp—yet those particulars don’t console. They accumulate until the island’s photograph-silence takes over, and the reader feels what the speaker feels: that memory can be as merciless as time, because it keeps showing you exactly what was there, and exactly what can’t be re-entered. In the end, Everything has happened
sounds like an adult trying to say it plainly and failing: everything happened, and still it doesn’t add up to something you can hold.
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