The Song Of Hiawatha 13 Blessing The Cornfields - Analysis
Peace is announced like a spell
The poem’s central claim is that plenty doesn’t arrive by accident: it is made through collective labor, ritual protection, and, when necessary, hard enforcement. Longfellow opens by ordering us to Sing
—not to argue or explain—so the scene enters like a chant. Peace is not just described but repeatedly buried: Buried was the bloody hatchet
, Buried was the dreadful war-club
, until even the war-cry was forgotten
. The tone here is bright and relieved, yet also slightly forceful, as if harmony needs constant re-declaring. That repeated burying hints at a tension that will matter later: violence is not erased, only put underground.
Mondamin: abundance as a buried body
The corn is treated as a person—Mondamin—so farming becomes a kind of ongoing relationship with a living sacrifice. The maize-fields waved
their green plumes
and soft and sunny tresses
, filling the village with visible wealth. But the same language insists the corn’s life is rooted in burial: the women Buried in the earth Mondamin
, and later Stripped the garments
from him at harvest. The poem admires this cycle without flinching from its bodily implication: to eat is to take, and to take is to unmake something that had been made beautiful.
Minnehaha’s night walk: protection through vulnerability
The hinge of the episode is Hiawatha’s instruction to Minnehaha to bless the fields by walking their border Lay aside your garments wholly
, Covered by your tresses only
. The tone shifts into hushed, ceremonial darkness—when all is silence
, when Nepahwin Shuts the doors
of the wigwams. The ritual’s logic is striking: the protection comes from footprints, from the body’s contact with the ground, from the woman who planted and will harvest. Yet the poem insists on privacy and consent: she is Unashamed and unaffrighted
, and the darkness, Guskewau, becomes a guardian so that none might boast
he saw her. The contradiction is sharp and purposeful: the community’s survival depends on an act that must remain unseen, a sacred intimacy between person, field, and night.
Mocking laughter meets real punishment
The crows and ravens, led by Kahgahgee, introduce a second kind of laughter—derisive and predatory. They jeer, Hear the Wise Man
, and their melancholy laughter
shakes the treetops, as if skepticism itself is a force of nature. Hiawatha answers not with more magic but with traps: he spreads Snares
, lies in ambush
, and then moves among them Striding terrible
. The sudden brutality—bodies hung on poles for scarecrows
—darkens the earlier peace. This is the poem’s hardest turn: the cornfields are called consecrated
, but they are guarded by a warning display. Plenty, the poem implies, is not simply a gift; it is defended territory.
A hard question the poem refuses to soften
If the magic circle of footprints can stop blight
and mildew
, why does the poem still require a massacre and a hostage? One answer is that the threats are different: insects and weather are impersonal, but hunger and raid are choices. The poem quietly argues that ritual can bless a world, but it cannot negotiate with a will.
Harvest laughter: community joy with a shadow overhead
After violence, the poem returns to festivity: the maize ripens into garments green and yellow
, and the village gathers for husking under fragrant pine-trees
. The soundscape becomes communal—young people laughing
and singing
like magpies, blue-jays, robins—while the old men sit in uninterrupted silence
, responding only Ugh!
This split is another tension: youth turns harvest into flirtation (the red ear red as blood
promises a sweetheart), while age receives it with restrained approval. Even the earlier menace is not fully gone; Kahgahgee screamed and quivered
from the wigwam, and the black marauders answer from treetops. The closing mood is therefore layered: laughter wins the field for the moment, but the poem keeps reminding us that abundance is always bordered—by forest, by hunger, by memory, and by whatever was only ever “buried.”
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