Talk With Prudence To A Beggar - Analysis
poem 119
A poem that warns against the cruelty of comfort
Dickinson’s central claim is sharp and a little chilling: when you speak from abundance to someone in deprivation, even your well-meant words can become a kind of violence. The poem reads like advice, but its advice is barbed. It tells the privileged reader to practice prudence
, reverently
, and cautious
speech—not because the poor or imprisoned are fragile, but because the speaker’s plenty is itself an insult when placed beside someone else’s lack.
The tone is controlled and formal, yet the control feels like a blade. Dickinson adopts the voice of etiquette—how to talk properly—only to reveal that etiquette here is really damage control. It’s as if the poem says: your life is so full that ordinary conversation becomes dangerous in the presence of emptiness.
Potosi: naming wealth as a wound
The first stanza pivots on a single, vivid mismatch: a Beggar
placed beside Potose, and the mines!
Potosí (spelled Potose
here) evokes legendary mineral wealth; paired with Beggar
, it makes poverty look like the shadow cast by extraction and riches. The command to talk with prudence
suggests that mentioning money, or even speaking in the register of the well-off, can rub salt into the beggar’s condition. Dickinson doesn’t sentimentalize the beggar; she exposes the social awkwardness of plenty standing next to need, and implies that the awkwardness is earned.
Viands
and wines
: the obscenity of specificity
The second couplet intensifies the discomfort by getting more concrete: the Hungry
are set against your viands, and your wines!
The possessive your
matters: this isn’t abstract food, it’s someone’s stocked table, someone’s cellar. The poem’s instruction to speak Reverently
is darkly ironic—reverence is usually reserved for holy things, but here it’s demanded because your menu is practically blasphemy in front of hunger. A tension emerges: the speaker seems to urge kindness, yet the kindness required is mostly self-censorship, as though the privileged person’s ordinary life is too loud to be said aloud.
From beggar to captive: the turn toward confinement
The second stanza shifts from poverty to imprisonment, and with it the poem’s stakes sharpen. It addresses any Captive
and reminds the reader: You have passed enfranchised feet!
That phrase makes freedom physical—feet that move where they choose—and it frames liberty as something you can casually pass
along the road, barely noticing. The poem isn’t only about what you say; it’s about what your body, unshackled and mobile, is already saying in front of someone trapped.
Anecdotes of air
: when comfort becomes torment
The most unsettling image arrives in Anecdotes of air in Dungeons
. Air is not a luxury until you’re denied it; then it becomes a story you can’t bear to hear. Dickinson’s phrase deadly sweet
crystallizes the poem’s contradiction: what is sweet to the free—fresh air as a casual pleasure—can be deadly to the captive because it intensifies longing. The poem suggests that deprivation doesn’t just remove things; it changes the meaning of things. In a dungeon, even a cheerful description of the outdoors can become a kind of poison, not because the captive is weak, but because the mind is forced to feed on what it cannot have.
A harder implication: is silence the only mercy?
The poem keeps tightening its warnings until an uncomfortable question forms: if speech about food and air can harm, what kind of conversation is left? Dickinson seems to imply that privilege must learn restraint, but also that restraint doesn’t fix the underlying injustice. The speaker can watch their words around the Hungry
and the Captive
, yet their very existence—wines
, enfranchised feet
—still stands there, speaking.
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