Would You Like Summer Taste Of Ours - Analysis
poem 691
A street-vendor voice selling the season
The poem’s central move is to turn summer into something you can purchase, swallow, and use as treatment. It opens like a cheery pitch: Would you like summer?
then immediately answers with the language of a stall or shop: Taste of ours
and Buy here!
Dickinson makes nature sound less like a landscape than like merchandise dispensed in measured portions. That voice matters: it’s brisk, a little theatrical, and oddly intimate, as if the speaker already knows what hurts and has the right remedy ready.
But the salesmanship also suggests a hunger beneath it. If summer can be bought, then summer isn’t secure; it’s scarce enough to be hawked. The poem’s charm is inseparable from its pressure: the speaker is not merely describing berries and roses, but offering them to people in some kind of need.
Diagnoses, then cures: the poem’s urgent catalog
After the opening, the poem becomes a rapid series of conditions and answers, each announced with an exclamation: Ill!
Weary!
Perplexed!
Captive!
Fainting!
Each cry is met with a tailored gift. For the parching
there are berries
, a practical sweetness meant to cool and revive. For the Weary!
there are Furloughs of down!
—not just rest, but sanctioned leave, as if exhaustion is a battle and the body a soldier.
What the poem sells, then, is not only sensual pleasure but relief: food, softness, reprieve, air. Even the most ordinary offering—Flasks of air!
—becomes a medicinal ration, suggesting that what should be free and everywhere is, in the speaker’s world, something you might run out of.
Violet trouble and rose reprieve: beauty that carries pain
The more psychological states get the strangest, most revealing cures. To the Perplexed!
the speaker offers Estates of violet trouble
that were ne’er looked on
. The phrase is a knot: trouble is not erased but given a color—violet—and expanded into estates, a whole property of feeling you can enter. The cure for confusion isn’t clarity; it’s a larger, newly visible terrain of sorrow, made oddly beautiful.
Likewise, for the Captive!
the poem doesn’t promise liberation, only reprieve of roses
. Roses stand in for pleasure, love, ceremony; but reprieve is temporary. Dickinson lets the sweet thing keep its limits: summer can soften captivity without necessarily ending it. The tension here is sharp: nature is presented as medicine, yet the poem admits medicine may only suspend suffering, not solve it.
The turn: when the pitch reaches Death
The catalog escalates until it includes the final customer: Even for Death
there is a fairy medicine
. This is the hinge. Up to this point, the speaker has addressed ailments that could plausibly be eased by comfort or beauty. Bringing Death into the marketplace changes the stakes: summer becomes not merely restorative but potentially anti-final, an enchantment that claims jurisdiction where no human vendor should.
Calling it fairy
medicine adds a double edge. It suggests charm, lightness, and a childlike faith in cures—but also unreliability, the kind of remedy that belongs to folklore rather than science. The poem flirts with a promise it cannot responsibly guarantee, and that flirtation is part of its energy.
But, which is it, sir?
: choice, or interrogation?
The last line—But, which is it, sir?
—snaps the performance into a direct confrontation. After all the exclamations, the speaker demands a diagnosis from the listener: what are you, exactly—ill, weary, perplexed, captive, fainting? The politeness of sir
makes the question feel public and transactional, as if sorrow must be named before it can be treated.
Yet the question also exposes a contradiction: the poem has been offering a little of everything, as though one season could cover every wound. Now it asks for specificity, hinting that the buyer’s need will outstrip the seller’s set of remedies. Summer may be abundant, but the poem ends by implying that human suffering is various—and that choosing a single label may be impossible.
A sharper possibility: the vendor as tempter
If summer can medicate Even for Death
, then the poem’s kindness begins to resemble temptation. Is the speaker offering comfort, or luring the listener into believing that beauty can postpone the one certainty? The final question leaves that unease hanging, as if the most dangerous thing being sold is not berries or roses, but hope in a dose that might not hold.
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